Saturday, August 6, 2016

Smile She's Here..... Comments

Rating: 4.9

Smile She's Here

It was four am the clock chimes
sounds of whispers swooning
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Annette Aitken
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Annette 18 July 2019

Love poem with my name.lol.

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Bri Edwards 06 September 2016

quite upbeat! a nice treat! what is there, for breakfast, to eat? ? ? bri ;)

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 August 2016

She was in all her glory! ! Nice work.

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 August 2016

This is beautiful....... wonderful imagination.... She Comes in the morning..... beautiful being steps forward. seeing nature as a feminine beauty......... thank you for this wonderful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016

Sounds of whispers swooning around imagery to express beauty of nature with amazing expression painted through expression of words. Amazing! ...10

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Tom Billsborough 09 August 2016

A lovely poem with a lovely photo to match. A day full of promise. I'm a natural early riser and I'm at my best then. Tom

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Christopher Tye 09 August 2016

Great poem and wonderful read, good writing always shines though like the sun at it's brightest.

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Bill Cantrell 06 August 2016

I love nature poems, this is wonderful, sheer joy is indeed the blessing on a new day, really good poem.

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