Smile Please Comments

In the beginning itself I caught what you are finally going to say. A good work. A vivid scene seen through very humorous angle. You have hit at the right spot. When I read this poem, I was reminded of a scene from a film in which the photographer does all similar things to a couple, especially to the husband who wears a serious face and fails to smile. It is a cracking scene.

he ordered Look at me Smile please! Rachel Ann Butler

beautiful...ready................smileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...

Great write Salu...enjoyed the read...thank you...Fi

excellent piece of writing salu, keeps you glue'd to your seat....lovely Best wishes Jon

great narrative language and very interest with it's ending.

an interesting experience very vividly captured!

What a snapshot! A wonderful poem Salu.......Deserves 10/10.

surprising ending.. well penned poem..

Cute poem...I enjoyed your vivid recollection of the event. 10/10. -Michael

haha! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! amusing................well penned

A simple incident very lovel and vividly put

Sweet poem. I like it like I imagining a memory of mine.. beautiful..

niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice i love it.... it is geat poem...10+++++++++++ well done

Great funny poem. Loved it. Hadda givvit atenner. God bless all poets-MJG.

a write that birightens up the reader's spirits inviting a smile on and beneath the eyes...very interesting, Salu...refreshing the mind indeed...10

hey a nice description of your photograph keep sharing regards anju

A most hillarious scene indeed. My dad briefed me about it. A fun poem indeed!

Love this descriptive piece about a photograph...thank you