Thursday, August 18, 2016

Smile-Pain Comments

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I don't understand this life at all,
There is no sorrow but my eyes are always filled with tears.
What is it which makes me down in dumps? ?
I don't understand this pang at all,
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Randhir kaur
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Siddartha Montik 03 January 2017

This is life.. and Pain. Liked the feelings expressed! ! Simple thanks..! Simply!

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 September 2016

To smile through the pain! ! No pain, no gain. Growing up in life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Abduhoo Salamath 27 August 2016

woow.. what a brilliant thinking and way of writting in this age...really excellent...you have bright future..keep writing good deeds and sharing. nice image with good word.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 26 August 2016

Without sorrow still there are tears in eyes. Life and smile both are mysterious definitely. This is very interestingly penned poem that talks about effects of mind.10

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Christopher Tye 24 August 2016

Wonderful poem and a great read. The more difficult times of life make the better times more enjoyable.

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Randhir Kaur 24 August 2016

Thank you Kishore Sir for your kind words.

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Kishore Kumar Das 21 August 2016

Nice poem......to understand gain, you must experience pain.....that is the beauty of life.......thanks for sharing this thought..

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Randhir kaur

Randhir kaur

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