Monday, November 27, 2017

Smile On Your Face Comments

Rating: 5.0

The laughter that fills my space
And the smile on your face
Brightens my day
Today and every day
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Rini Shibu
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 December 2017

The little curve of your smile is the light that perks from miles and the dimples on the cheeks my heart always seek...LOVELY SMILES rINi...if CAPS ARE MISSING IT'S LAPSTOP'S DELIGHT NOT DOES POETRY CAPS LIGHT

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Rini Shibu 02 December 2017

Thanks poet

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 November 2017

The laughter that fills my space/And the smile on your face/Brightens my day....A great poetic imagination makes this poem so endearing! Loved your sparkling write Rini!

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Rini Shibu 28 November 2017

Thanks Dillip.. Happiness is when readers feel the poem

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The Crow 27 November 2017

Beautiful, simply beautiful.10

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Rini Shibu 27 November 2017

Thanks John.. Nice to see your comment here

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 November 2017

Such a lovely write. Smiles bring joy to everyone. Nicely presented...10

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Rini Shibu 27 November 2017

Thank you so much Rose for reading and commenting

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Lamar Cole 27 November 2017

This is a very nice feelgood poem about smile on your face.

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Rini Shibu 27 November 2017

Thanks Lam.. Keep smiling

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 November 2017

Laughter on face is reflected by beauty of smiles. This is an interesting poem beautifully penned.10

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Rini Shibu 27 November 2017

Thanks Kumar for your comment..

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