Monday, March 29, 2010
Smile Of The Moon Comments
Rating: ★4.0
Your stare of compassion could use no disguise,
As intense and captivating as red-orange skies,
Yet, they retain a dark beauty that shimmers and flies,
It's the smile of the moon, that I see in your eyes.
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Derrick Andrews
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Jean Dament
29 March 2010
A sweet poem of romance using the moon to reflect the state of your love. It has a nice, natural flow to it & was enjoyable to read. Jeannie Spiritsong
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7/27/2025 10:08:27 AM # 1.0.0
thats very nicely written. very romancey! ! (is that a word?) i loved it! please look at some of my poems, thanks!