Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Smile Of Hope Comments

Rating: 5.0

My life was a routine, and sadly always be
No one understands me, I am out of glee
I go to a slide, hoping for a change
I fall down so gently, with some hair out of range
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Obinna Eruchie 02 July 2009

An interesting poem on hope brightened.

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Linda Winchell 04 February 2009

I loved this poem. Ten! God Bless, Linda

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Very lovely vision.Nice rhyme.Another ten.

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Ency Bearis 26 November 2008

great poem....verses to light up life...well narrated...10 Ency Bearis

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Deirdre Conde 20 November 2008

this is a good poem, danzen. you should keep writing more of this.: D

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