Friday, October 17, 2014

Smile Of A Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

Carefree of theft!
See him from the left,
See him from the right,
In a moment of delight!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Anjandev Roy 12 December 2019

Beautiful simply beautiful. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Khalid Saifullah 04 January 2018

Such a beautiful write on a smiling child!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 October 2014

Naught but soft child gives beautiful mild smile. Very beautiful and rhymed poem. Nice job on sharing.

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Ramesh Rai 20 October 2014

Plucked a flower of smile, Made his lips fertile, The clay He was tiling, He was God smiling. What a wonderful write sir. The whole poem is sweet and lovely.

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Valsa George 20 October 2014

Another lovely write... There is a special sound effect for your poems like the jingling rhymes of Edgar Allan Poe! Enjoyed much this take on the innocent pursuits of an adorable child in the garden!

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Salini Nair 19 October 2014

a window of innocence, Courage, a virtue of ignorance! .............................its the beauty of a child...nice

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Khalida Bano Ali 17 October 2014

A child smiling in dreams is a beauty pure of all dirt.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 October 2014

Children the holy beings...Angels are playing and enjoying with them...they are free from human infection 'cause they are not infected...they ae the pure human...

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