Tuesday, September 23, 2014

Smile Not For All Comments

Rating: 5.0

Friendly smile a lovely gift to exchange
Yet frown is what is found in abundance
Behind their vacant faces and strange look
Prisoners in their hard shell they harbor
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Savita Tyagi
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 October 2014

Beautiful message delivered through the last three lines. A message for everyone to follow. A smile spreads goodwill.

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Valsa George 26 September 2014

A joyful heart sends loving waves Like sun spreading its light Across cosmos day and night. A great conclusion to a sweet poem! I too strongly believe in this! There are many who languish in life with no one to smile at them!

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Akhtar Jawad 23 September 2014

A joyful heart sends loving waves Like sun spreading its light Across cosmos day and night. A lovely message But smile for those who are not facing a tragedy, for them are kind words to relieve his pain.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 September 2014

In fact we must greet and welcome smile its for every one like flowers joy and fragrance, yet we think or wrongly conceived that this is not for me/us..so the poetess Savita beautifully has drawn the attention or a kind of reminder..Forget Not my smile is for all.. thank you savita for such a nice poem 10

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Gajanan Mishra 23 September 2014

your smile and your kindness, I like it.

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