Saturday, October 8, 2016

Smile My Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

So soft, so innocent, and so mild,
Do not cry, rather smile my child,
It is the best time to smile my dear,
I wish you a smile but again I fear,
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Valsa George 10 October 2016

A wonderful write alerting us to the atrocities of war! Death is preferred to being burnt survivors! War always leaves a trail of misery behind! ! A sure 10

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Khalid Saifullah 09 October 2016

A lovely poem, a great message and a warning, too.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2016

Smile poem on smile day is very nicely drafted and shared. A smile erases out pain of others and fills mind in happiness. Smile determines love. God definitely saves. Smiling again is fortune.10

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