Sunday, October 22, 2006
Smile Like Those Cherry-Bounded Snow Comments
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Through punches of keys,
we have read each other.
Eyes,
touching through whispers,
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Sue Ann Simar
29 October 2006
Lyrical. If the language were a little more precise, I think you would increase the poetic quality and the imagery. Precise may not be the right work. A little tighter or more concise......you have the gift and your own mindset already, you only need to reel it in.
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7/22/2025 3:02:06 AM # 1.0.0
words that express feelings are artistic... if someone doesn't understand that, is cause they are not reading from their heart... I love this poem! I could feel it! Thanks for sharing!