Sunday, February 1, 2009

. Smile, Laugh, Love, Live. Comments

Rating: 2.9

Smile, laugh, love, live
I walk down the street, smiling, laughing
Loving, living and he’s there
My knight in shining armour
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Amy
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Dev Anand 28 December 2018

He pulls me into his arms Holds me tight and whispers Smile, laugh, love, live at the end of the poem i was really impressed. a nice poem

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Jonny Brackney 29 December 2011

I have to say...when I started reading this poem. I thought it was going to be another drab rant about living, loving, and laughing...like one of those lame quotes that girls put on their facebook page. By the end I was very impressed, and felt ignorant for assuming such things. Well done.

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Jose Delosantos 26 July 2010

Wow This Is A Beautiful Poem! ! HUGE 10: D

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 26 July 2010

============================ ‘Nothing left to love But myself Nothing left to live For Full stop’ ~ Very ‘Touchy’ lines locus…Melancholy Magic…a topic of many poets …here you’ve brought alive Melancholy Jilt… thanks for sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 =========== PS Please start a new sentence after full stop...nay Poetry will go to sentence lol n

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Interesting poem. They say love makes the world go round..without it... Good write; D

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Angelic Warrior 07 July 2009

a life without love is no life at all......so very sad: (

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Alex Andreev 18 June 2009

i look at yo' poem and i think ya really get a talent... this one is so sensual 'n' touchy... keep it on dear Amy

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 May 2009

Cute and touchy Amy.10 for it.

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T S 15 April 2009

We all need a Knight in shining Armour 10/10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 09 April 2009

you are not unique...........your feeling are ubiquitous....everyone goes through this....what i would say is..........smile, laugh, love and live.......Good Write.......

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