Smile, laugh, love, live
I walk down the street, smiling, laughing
Loving, living and he’s there
My knight in shining armour
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I have to say...when I started reading this poem. I thought it was going to be another drab rant about living, loving, and laughing...like one of those lame quotes that girls put on their facebook page. By the end I was very impressed, and felt ignorant for assuming such things. Well done.
============================ ‘Nothing left to love But myself Nothing left to live For Full stop’ ~ Very ‘Touchy’ lines locus…Melancholy Magic…a topic of many poets …here you’ve brought alive Melancholy Jilt… thanks for sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 =========== PS Please start a new sentence after full stop...nay Poetry will go to sentence lol n
Interesting poem. They say love makes the world go round..without it... Good write; D
i look at yo' poem and i think ya really get a talent... this one is so sensual 'n' touchy... keep it on dear Amy
you are not unique...........your feeling are ubiquitous....everyone goes through this....what i would say is..........smile, laugh, love and live.......Good Write.......
He pulls me into his arms Holds me tight and whispers Smile, laugh, love, live at the end of the poem i was really impressed. a nice poem