Wednesday, March 1, 2006

Smile Inside. Comments

Rating: 3.9

There's a smile inside
I can find it when I'm alone
in a cafe when it rains.
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John Kipling Lewis
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 22 March 2008

good smiles.excellent imagery

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K Holoholo 06 November 2007

Good one, I like it. It get the brain and thoughts a thinking.

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

5. A good start, but focus on the details and images and not the abstractions (things like 'fear' and such which don't convey specific experience, but generalities.)

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Brian Beek 05 November 2007

i feel like this sometimes...very nice

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John Kipling Lewis

John Kipling Lewis

Manhattan, KS
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