“Life is not in our hand” many people profess
We too fall in same line and confess
Yet choose different line and approach
Life is then led differently as such
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Maricela Ramírez likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
superb Elizabeth Shapiro5 minutes ago exceptional poetry Comment +1
life lessons Antonio Beardall6 minutes ago Reads like a manual for life. Well written. Comment +1
It trails off and gets a little confusing at points. Morgan Lindsey6 minutes ago I didn't understand the use of quotes or the message of the poem.
“Life is not in our hand” many people profess We too fall in same line and confess
Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 21 minutes ago · Unlike · 1