Monday, April 27, 2020

Smile In Hardship Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life can thrive even in hardship,
Just a smile can still offer friendship,
You became my friend on that instant,
The time I stood near you, a little distant.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Valsa George 21 May 2020

I remember to have posted a comment on this poem, but sadly it doesn't show up! This poem really fascinated me as I too have written a poem on an unassuming wild flower that shot out of a cranny. Even in the midst of adversity, it managed to peep its head from a small fissure of a rock and carry a smile on its face in the most hostile circumstances. If we can also smile in adversities, we will be successful!

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Khairul Ahsan 02 November 2020

@Valsa George, The theme of my poem has been better explained by your comment than the poem itself. Thank you very much for the thoughtful comment. 'If we can also smile in adversities, we will be successful! ' - Yes, absolutely so!

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Mj Lemon 02 May 2020

Life can certainly rise to ever greater heights, both literal and metaphorical. Fine verse, Khairul.

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Khairul Ahsan 02 November 2020

Thank you, @Mj Lemon, for visiting my page and appreciating the poem. Your comment is inspiring and tells a lot about your ability to read between the lines.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 May 2020

Smile! ! ! ! Bring joy to your heart! In times like this; Muse of coronavirus! Hardships, Lockdown; Able to overcome the odds. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2020

Dear Poet Edward, I am much inspired by your thoughts you shared as a comment on my poem. Thanks for visiting my page and leaving the kind comment.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2020

Thanks for your appreciative comment, @EKL.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 April 2020

Life can be tough, but never so futile, As to be overcast with gloom and not a smile. Beautiful lines of a lovely poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2020

@Akhtar Jawad, Thanks for quoting from my poem the lines that you loved, thanks for the appreciation. Much obliged!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 April 2020

A well inked lovely poem....10+++

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Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2020

Thanks for your generous rating of the poem and the inspiring comment on it, @Bernard F. Asuncion.

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 April 2020

Life can thrive even in hardship, Just a smile can still offer friendship, .............. Life can be tough, but never so futile, ........../// greatly written; Sir Yeah; this life has various power to manage everything either it be so tough or easy life of human is more powerful than any flora or any animal if human wants to win everything can do easily and for that should be well planned goal.....///

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Khairul Ahsan 02 November 2020

Thank you, @Mahtab Bangalee, for your thoughtful comment. Much inspired by your thoughts.

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