Friday, October 6, 2006

Smile Graveyard Truce Comments

Rating: 5.0

Smile graveyard truce:
I accept tombstones of doom,
I’ve abandoned promise,
I’ve abandoned love.
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Uriah Hamilton
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Joseph Daly 07 October 2006

I like the weariness that seems to be expressed in the unique poem. The few words speak volumes and are quite arresting. A really good poem Uriah.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 October 2006

Inveterating piece, indeed...like th' decorum of th' language''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Sandra Fowler 06 October 2006

Your poem is a treasure, though I am sorry for the sadness that prompted you to write it. Shine on, Uriah. Your rare gift keeps on giving. Sandra

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