Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, December 27, 2013

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Her voice rings in ears
Her resolve with no fears
“I shall stand by you”
I take her words as true
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 December 2013

Very beautiful! Suzanna Valliere4 minutes ago I thought the poem was kind of stiff, but the ending makes up for it. Comment 0 Wonderful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 December 2013

Dhirendra Kumar Panda20 minutes ago Nice poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 December 2013

Very romantic tale. darran hardwick18 minutes ago My favourite stanza is in 3 I believe in her In every inch she is sincere Honest and loved creature I see in her my future. Well done, D. H. Comment +1 Interesting but conflicted

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 December 2013

Her voice rings in ears Her resolve with no fears

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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