Sunday, February 8, 2015

Smile Cute Flowers Comments

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Grandchildren gathered around the old man,
It's seventieth birthday and he looks some tired,
See they are singing a sweet lovely song,
He is happy to be loved and so much admired,
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Salini Nair 15 February 2015

As long you smile I shall not die, With you sweet hearts my final pact, ...................beautiful....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 February 2015

As long you smile I shall not die, With you sweet hearts my final pact, - - - -Actually smile is eternal. Nicely envisioned about smile. Many thanks.

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Ruma Chaudhuri 08 February 2015

Oh, lovely. Its an excellent poem. You are very happy with your grand child's. And they also. But you are not merely a children's toy. You are a source of happiness and joy to each and everyone. With regards, Ruma

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Valsa George 08 February 2015

It is quite evident from all your writings that you are an adorable grandpa to your grand children! in their company, you become another kid! A jocund company radiates a lot of cheer in others too! Enjoyed!

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Khalida Bano Ali 08 February 2015

It's a wonderful poem, Happy Birthday..........10

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