Smile Can Change Comments
Why smile is necessary?
What message does it carry?
Good will or kind gesture
Or secret hint for sure?
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Surendra Meghwal likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
Good idea, but trying to rhyme overtakes Lindsay Nejedlo24 minutes ago You've done a good job with the use of rhyme, though you do not want to take away from the meaning of a poem in order to force a rhyme. I feel as though there is a bit of filler in order to make the rhyme work. I like the idea. A smile is important! :)
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Re: Smile can change (Score: 1) by Rabbitt on Sunday, July 14,2013 (13: 18: 54) Nice poem about a smile.