Thursday, June 13, 2019

Smile And Sigh Comments

Rating: 5.0

And after our mighty sun
Gifts earth plenty of warmth
Night is desired for a chill.
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Elena Sandu
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C F 26 June 2019

A poignant write... day is followed by night, love is followed by tears.10+ Daytime to love with might But nights, in tears ‘tis to swim

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 June 2019

Just like day is followed by night, grief and pain in one's life are followed by mirth and vice versa. A meaniingful short poem rich with rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kostas Lagos 13 June 2019

Excellent poem! To my list! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 June 2019

And so, it is a heart's delight Daytime to love with might But nights, in tears ‘tis to swim. ...Sigh…......outstanding conceptualization. A brilliant poem is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.10

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