Friday, August 5, 2005

Smile And Run Away Comments

Rating: 2.0

And now
can we really say we loved each other
that much?
I'm sure you'd have said yes
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Casey Rock
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Max Reif 06 August 2005

I really get this. It brings me a real wave of sadness, increased exponentially by that last line. The focus on shoes is very good.

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Raynette Eitel 05 August 2005

This follows the last one quiet well. I like the shoes image. I'd like to see you expand that a little before the poem ends. Raynette

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