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Sleep has no use to me,
let dearth flow in the water,
suffuse the air with smog,
but do not take away your smile.
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Umm, what do you need feedback for? Your poetry is wonderful. That poem had so muh heart and emotion to it. It was wonderful. Your choice of words and phrases was sublime. Great work and keep writing: -)
And you r asking for FEEDBACK? ? You're a wonderful poet! Just a suggestion - try not to repeat yourself that often. but otherwise you're great!
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7/26/2025 3:21:45 AM # 1.0.0
Absolutely beautiful.... loved this poem. HG: -) xx