Saturday, January 14, 2006

Smile Comments

Rating: 4.6

And then…..you smiled
I thought it was nothing,
I kept looking, it would be a mild …
Innocent encounter, no bother
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Michael S
COMMENTS
Sandra Osborne 02 June 2006

Some excellent lines. And it leaves an indelible impression after reading the whole, you leave a feeling without pushing. I like that. Excellent disconnected connected images. Keep writing.

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Kimberly Kastner 01 June 2006

This poem is just so pretty! Excellent work! ; -)

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David Gerardino 31 May 2006

great poem, a lttle long, but good................

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Noemi Lee 31 May 2006

All smiles have a song and a story dont they? Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Linda Stroud 20 January 2006

I think A Smile is real good. Keep up the good work! : 0) >

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