Monday, January 28, 2019

Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

Smile
(My Cleopatra)

Black is needed as backbone
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Prabir Gayen
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Love is needed to feel pain hou art the shadow of joy, Thou art the tree of life, The fluid of joy is eternal Beautifully written on the truth of life

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 January 2019

A wonderfully written poem, Prabir....10+++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 January 2019

Your poem is like a wave in an ocean of poetic expressions, thanks for sharing

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 January 2019

Your poem is like a wave from an ocean of poetic expressions.

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Prabir Gayen 29 January 2019

smile is the depiction of love towards life

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 28 January 2019

sir, sorry for a mistake: 'you' had been written accidently instead 'i'.

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Prabir Gayen 29 January 2019

OK dear brother....thanks

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 28 January 2019

Sorry for mistake; 'you' had written accidently instead 'i'.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 28 January 2019

an eloquent write! each line is full of poetry that i read and feel as in the bards'. an ornament of romantic poetry. sir, you would be lucky to get your views about my poem The Wind: An Extreme Instance.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 January 2019

The harmony is hidden In the valley of thy womb, Thou art from where love drops Like from cyder- press.. Smile, joy, happiness, you write a lot my dear Prabir to expose a theme which is so deep in you. tony.

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Prabir Gayen 28 January 2019

Thanks dear beloved poet...

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