Saturday, December 16, 2017

Smile Comments

Rating: 4.5

There comes a time when you have to be happy, if even for a day.
Everyday shouldn't be grey, the Sun should shine for a little while.
What a beautiful day, Did I just smile?
Depression sucks and makes you feel ill, it makes you crazy like a bunch of pills.
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Dr Antony Theodore 16 December 2017

Depression sucks and makes you feel ill but look at the rainbow, singing birds, smile of the Little schildren and begin to smile and Dance along with the breeze dancing in the wind.... fall in love my dear poetess.. tony

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The Crow 16 December 2017

Rhyme Royal, where? But, be happy, not many care anymore. Nice sentiment.

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Priyani 16 December 2017

I would like the way that you create this poem and thank you.

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Theresa Dunn 27 January 2018

Thank you all very much

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Theresa Dunn

Theresa Dunn

Pearisberg Va
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