Wednesday, July 17, 2019

Smile Comments

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He walks through life with a smile
even when life is vile
looking at the face of hate
he wouldn't let anything berate
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Aqua Flower
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Terry Craddock 24 November 2020

His Nick Name Was Smiley he never liked pity never showed his pain walked through life with constant smiles a happy care free character this was his widespread fame fun beauty love ever gift smiled in his soulful eyes people wine loved pleasure his company delight his smiles but beneath a happy character he scars bore tragic life time trials Inspired by the poem 'Smile' by the poet Aqua Flower. Dedicated to the poet Aqua Flower.

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Terry Craddock 07 November 2020

His Nick Name Was Smiley he never liked pity never showed his pain, walked through life with constant smiles, a happy care free character this was his fame, fun and beauty ever gift smiled in his eyes, people loved pleasure his company delight his smiles, but beneath a happy character he bore tragic life trials

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Jane Campion 17 July 2019

A nice positive poem smiles.

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