Tuesday, July 21, 2015

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'm not sure, whats been through all
i try not to stare
but my eyes slips through the wall
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Manauwer Raza
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 July 2015

Very nicely envisioned and aptly presented. Excellent phraseology. I like the lines most are ..... this could take time and a while and i just want you to know without trying or knowing you can always make me smile. Thanks you for sharing such intensive poem.

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Manauwer Raza 21 July 2015

thank you Sir, as esteem a personality you are, these words coming from you are really a delight... thank you :)

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