Saturday, February 14, 2015

Smile Comments

Rating: 4.6

Smile is a facial expression
It does express the pleasure,
Mouth turns up with amusement
Silent laugh gives mouth leisure.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2022

Truthfulness and non-violence are highly essential to keep one smiling always... true

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2022

Truthful and non-violence are great traits of a good human being.

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Rebecca Navarre 21 January 2021

Honesty brings honesty and kindness brings peace! .. Ever so beautifully expressed! .. Thank you for sharing! .. Definitely 5 Stars plus! ..................

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Rebecca Navarre 21 January 2021

Keys of the heart that start with a smile! .. Smiles bring smiles to the heart! .. Thank you and please also brings cheer

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Khairul Ahsan 10 December 2020

Smile is the index of a happy mind. Both the giver and the recipient of a smile feels happy with the exchange.

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 January 2019

so beautiful stanza - Smile says, I am pleased I am ever ready It too says, Yes, I did understand I can do this in sturdy. /// smiling a graceful boon on mouth by the grateful mind

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Hazel Durham 25 February 2015

A smile can bring joy to our hearts connecting us with people in a happy way, beautiful write that captures the beauty of a smile!

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Vaishnavi Singh 17 February 2015

Loved the feelings of this poem. There need to be some changes like 'Makes' instead of 'bring' and 'there' instead of 'they' in last stanza. The '? ' in 2nd stanza seems improper. I hope this to be helpful for this poem

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Akhtar Jawad 15 February 2015

A nice study of smile..........................10

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Valsa George 15 February 2015

Smile is the expression of a contented, joyous and warm heart! Happiness is radiated through a pleasant smile and it is an invitation to others to be bound by love! Sweet poem!

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Salini Nair 15 February 2015

Truthfulness and nonviolence Bring a person smile, People should follow right path And they should be noble style........great words sir

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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