Saturday, June 22, 2013

Smile Comments

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Fortunately people say,
that i am nice,
they too adore,
that i have a way with my life...
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simran arora
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Jenie Franksay 24 June 2013

i think you need to improve your spellings. you are talented undoubtly.

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Hans Vr 22 June 2013

You are really fortunate if people say you are nice So many people never get this compliment But then most of the nice-ness comes from within. If people do notiice you are nice. that means you are radiant from the inside. So many smiles go unnoticed but if a smile comes from the heart it is the most beautiful smile we can see I love the write. I suggest you write in verses. the way it is presented is more like prose

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