Smile Comments

smile as a golden carpet. there is always great attraction in the smile of a woman...... inviting...... love it. dev

Makes the one standing before- to glisten; Grabbing all the others attention. Gifting us a life of divine, It also paves a way, to live more and more! the great power of a smile. it attracts and the people are affected by this lovely language of the smile..... may you smile always. thank you dear poetess. tony

Great poem I enjoyed reading it

Gifting us a life of divine, It also paves a way, to live more and more! .. smile is great asset.. beautifully written...10

This poem is very nice. Very well written and speaks with a lot of emotion also. Keep up the good work.

That is a very warming poem as your smile is I'm sure.

Smile is a great language.Poem is very nice.

A smile is so influential. it affects everyone.

yes, smile spreads sunshine and cheer all around....it also helps in winning friends

a smile can do wonder in winning friends and cheering up others.keep inking.very nice.

that poem really grabs attention................may u smile through the miles.......

This poem is so cool it reminds me of Cinderella when she came to the ball and everyone stopped and looked at her because she's so beautiful

A smile, at the right time, never fails to enliven the spirits of those around us. The tinkling teeth veils behind it, Yearning to have a worldly sight! Beautiful lines. 10++

a swwet and well thought out words

The tinkling teeth veils behind it, Yearning to have a worldly sight! Even its solemn silence before us, Warms our heart by all ways! Lovely lines which brings happiness to the heart and smile to everyone's face.

nicely penned, showing poetical skill. shan

Thats how smile takes someone a long way when someone has to sell illusions of heart and delusions in brandings of retail stuffs.We live in a world of smiles where it has many definitions pertinent with one`s conditions.The poem here yours is ascending to a condition where mankind in the form of men and women wants to be satisfied physically and mentally beyond all the worldly pains.Thats why the carpet opens and it is precious moment as it is golden in colour.Then the wish and yearn that it spreads vast and wide to retain sweet memories as an elixir of life on the battered track of dailiness where people in smile has had to endure smile always.Then the phrase New pink bud that of a budding rose to rosemerry togetherness, blooming to its freshness which was long so dormant in the realistic bent of mind.Teeth do tinkles indeed from the sordid world and searches exotic locations for a rosicor conversation in silence to reign....overall a compact crescendo into a budding love story starting with the smile of the writer.A well-shaped poignant write on simulating love..

yes! ! ! ! ! ! ! a smilig face is always welcomed.......... a smile on ur face is like an open window which says dat there is a caring person inside.... kp smiling... u know d beauty of a smile., right? ? ? ? ? ? then i need not tell much abt dis poem........dis poem has got all qualities of a smile.....kp writing..

short and very sweet! ! keep smiling its beauty

interesting piece! How wil the world look like is there is no smile?