A golden carpet spread vast and wide,
Bringing us before, a dancing silvery deluge!
As if a new pink bud waking up,
From its deep and deep sleep;
Shows us a long and pretty cheerfulness,
Welcoming the hearts in all means!
The tinkling teeth veils behind it,
Yearning to have a worldly sight.
Even its solemn silence before us,
Warms our heart by all ways.
Makes the one standing before- to glisten;
Grabbing all the others attention.
Gifting us a life of divine,
It also paves a way, to live more and more!
that poem really grabs attention................may u smile through the miles.......
This poem is so cool it reminds me of Cinderella when she came to the ball and everyone stopped and looked at her because she's so beautiful
A smile, at the right time, never fails to enliven the spirits of those around us. The tinkling teeth veils behind it, Yearning to have a worldly sight! Beautiful lines. 10++
smile as a golden carpet. there is always great attraction in the smile of a woman...... inviting...... love it. dev
Makes the one standing before- to glisten; Grabbing all the others attention. Gifting us a life of divine, It also paves a way, to live more and more! the great power of a smile. it attracts and the people are affected by this lovely language of the smile..... may you smile always. thank you dear poetess. tony
Gifting us a life of divine, It also paves a way, to live more and more! .. smile is great asset.. beautifully written...10
This poem is very nice. Very well written and speaks with a lot of emotion also. Keep up the good work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a smile can do wonder in winning friends and cheering up others.keep inking.very nice.