Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, November 16, 2009

Smile Comments

Rating: 4.9

Life may not stop for a while
If you walk with me for an extra mile
Sweet talk with fragrance and smile
Unique and gorgeous with different style
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Adnan Khalifeh 10 March 2010

Smile....... What could be more nice & joyful on earth than a Queen in each house with her children, her smile...Our roses, our faith and our love.....? So, I say, whoever finds his smiling queen he finds his happiness.... But, protecting your Queen and keeping the smile on her face needs more than your smile my friend ….

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Merna Ibrahim 29 November 2009

The poem is stunning and I like mentioning all the roles and the consequences of a simple smile...I like many stanzas but I liked the last one the most...Well written.

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G Kandoi 16 November 2009

Lead life peacefully without unrest and at ease..........lovely...10

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Jayant Manik 16 November 2009

It leads me to believe in different way Can beautiful smile shine the ray? Can this not help us to usher in peace?

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Vinod Karmakar 16 November 2009

If you walk with me for an extra mile Sweet talk with fragrance and smile

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Dalsukh S 16 November 2009

Big empires were saved from disintegration Queen’s beautiful smile facilitated amalgamation

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Trevor William 16 November 2009

Can this not help us to usher in peace? Lead life peacefully without unrest and at ease

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Pradip Pillai 16 November 2009

Life may not stop for a while If you walk with me for an extra mile Sweet talk with fragrance and smile Unique and gorgeous with different style

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Bhanubhai Montu Shah 16 November 2009

Smile can make thousands of flowers to boom As children roar with laughter in room It is precious gift from the God to us

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Mahananda Pittle Jaswantlal 16 November 2009

Life may not stop for a while If you walk with me for an extra mile

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Meggie Gultiano 16 November 2009

Good smile may force you to confess It can lead to happy union with purpose If smile is offered with beautiful rose .......................... Ummmm, I am smiling here, my friend..Beautiful thoughts indeed..

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Pittle Shaileja 16 November 2009

Smile can make thousands of flowers to boom As children roar with laughter in room It is precious gift from the God to us

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Sejal Kapadia 16 November 2009

Life may not stop for a while If you walk with me for an extra mile Sweet talk with fragrance and smile Unique and gorgeous with different style

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Bharati Bhikhubhai 16 November 2009

Sweet talk with fragrance and smile Unique and gorgeous with different style

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Joseph Poewhit 16 November 2009

A smile costs nothing - also

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Kamlesh Ambalal 16 November 2009

Life may not stop for a while If you walk with me for an extra mile Sweet talk with fragrance and smile......so nicely composed poem....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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