Smile Comments
My skin was so tight I was suffocating
You loosened me back up so I could breath again
That first taste of air was intoxicating
I envisioned your big brown eyes each beautifully glistening from the light
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Yes, yes and yes. I wrote an entire short story in my head, inspired by your poem in just that instance. I think this is lovely. Keep writing!
before adding any word.. let me share my say with you about smile... (a friendly snile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq) My soul that was damaged you repaired with persistence Heart felt like it was on trial But you got me to smile Thats how I know this love is worthwhile the above verses are heart catchy and the logic you presented here is satisfactory and heart feeling..well written poem..10/10
Her presence sent a light to brighten your heart. Interesting.
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7/23/2025 9:49:01 AM # 1.0.0
when ever I see word of smile I feel happy because..this is only a friendly smiles making relations heart to heart.. your idea here is impressive and heart feeling one..let me support your smiles with my say as (a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq) 10/10