Sunday, May 31, 2009

Smile..! ! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

a smile comes out of nowhere
it brings with it love and cheer
a smile sets our moods right
it brings loved ones near
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Sneha Murali
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Ted M 16 August 2009

Loved it. Amazing display of talent. Great flow and a nice rythm, sounds more like a song...............10

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Kesav Easwaran 31 May 2009

'a smile is contagious and there is no cure and when you get it happiness is for sure'... these lines give bright imagery on 'smile'...good poem Sneha...10

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C. P. Sharma 31 May 2009

Awesome poetry. You seem to be a born poet. CP

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Afzal Shauq 31 May 2009

what a lovely poem is this one specially this stanza.... 'a smile comes out of nowhere it brings with it love and cheer a smile sets our moods right it brings loved ones near' I also believe on smile and consider it a best tool to make heart occopy.... I have writte one say about smile and its famous enough...let me share with you too.... (a freindly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq) ...this poem is heart feeling and good one..10 ++++++++++

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