Smile Comments

Yet I stick to show my will Brave and bold and stronger still Hence I wear the armor! SMILE! That glows my eyes and fervent heart this is simply superb...I invite you to read my poem called SMILES and BOOKMARK...Shall be grateful for your feedback

It is smile that cuts so deep Even then man doesn't weep CP

It is amazing! a fluid to heart! sore or sweet... but it is!

sandhya, you wrote this poem with a dagger in the heart... are you going to stab me?

a fine write on smile...we havemany ofit...friendly...vicious...

smile is the password /entry to open complexities and intricacies. a well tuned verse........rgrds/salu

beautiful! wordings were great, truly smile is a dependable shield, smile makes cantankerous men to kowtow, at your service, sir! Excellent...10+

dont look at me hha lol =]

So that what it means when they say that looks can kill....! But seriously, your sentiments echo with everyone's, sometime or the other. But I'd rather that you floor others with your smile. Must be difficult at times, though. Thanks for sharing. Cheers. Subroto

what all one hides behind smile...! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Very poignant, very touching and a good read. It makes the reader curious to know what is behind the smile or mask you wear so bravely. The poem is a mask to your feelings eh? Sometimes though, it is good to let people know you are not as happy as they might think, sometimes it is good to let the mask slip. Keep writing - you're good. Ruthy: -D

you are absloutely write.........smile is a weapon and smile shower the essentce of live/life.........many thaks for your sharing.

i love you described your smile as your armour.. great write 10

Love your work very much, sister! Smile..cost nothing, but smile..means everything.. Great written, thankz 4 sharing, I enjoy it very much.

Spell bounding composition....................

a glorious smile! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

An absolutely excellent style in the way to express the meaning of abstract things and I really like it. Great work. I gave 10

dear sandhya, an african girl in poemhunter wrote: behind every smile, there is a dropp of tear. i wish let that not be in your case......loved your lines....10

Fabulous expression! It reminds me the cliche- Smile is a small curve which can straighten out many things!

This is a very well written and charming poem, Sandhya, filled with fine imagery and very descriptive about the armor you prefer to wear. Most of us do wear 'armour' when meeting people, but when meeting a lovely lady, I would prefer she leave the armor home and wear an evening gown or a bikini! Just teasing, of course! Your poem is wonderfully expressive, which I like in a poem, and clearly displays to the reader that you have a fine poetic talent. Carl.