Saturday, March 14, 2009

Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who stole my sense of humour?
The vandal Fate?
I pick it up
in little bits,
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Heather Wilson 20 September 2012

Fate has a lot to answer for, I see you managed to fit all your smiles together in the end, a great poem, loved it.

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Saadat Tahir 10 July 2010

The vandal Fate? yes indeed....maybe ironic too... very well written...great cheers

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 December 2009

Beauuuuuuutiful…extra ‘L’s are your small pieces… 10 MS. NIVEDITA UK

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Who stole my sense of humour? .... who did this mischief andtook my smile.. what an out right presentation of views.beautiful write.....10 refer mine'How are u and rate... read martyres

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Sonya Florentino 29 March 2009

Yes! You ought to have the last laugh!

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Rosalita Fernandez 14 March 2009

I like this one! nicely done!

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