Thursday, July 2, 2009

Smell The Lavender Comments

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smell the lavender today
&cull a bouquet 2 ur lover
say goodbye 2 the life in grey
&welcome a new one with happiness among each other
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zeinab sherif
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Nooruddeen Mm 02 October 2009

Yes, you said it. Koran teaches to respect all other religion with out any discrimination and racism. But what is happening in this world? How we can stop it, How we can sleep peacefully, How we can move around? ? ? ? ? ? Endless questions…….. Good thought – good and powerful writing… Rgds Nooruddeen

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 15 August 2009

i appreciate your power of narration. shan

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 July 2009

Beautiful write having a positive message. Keep up the good work, Zeinab.

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Sherif Monem 08 July 2009

Very masterfully written at tender age. the line &during weaning, again u were crying&rude should be changing, 'rude' in the poem no place for it, try &during weaning, again u were impatiently crying

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Omar Ibrahim 03 July 2009

your mind is fresh.............and i like to see small egyptian fellows who have this fresh minds...............great poem and keep it up............. omar

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Merna Ibrahim 03 July 2009

AWESOME poem...actually, it is full of messages and advices.....I hope all these wishes would come true so I could be really optimistic......I think this poem and 'a man from heaven' are the best in your list! ! ! ......Great Job! ! Merna.

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2009

good poem this...but i would like you replace those '2s' there with more respectful 'to's...thanks...10

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Carol Gall 02 July 2009

so good with a positive message everyone needs to see i love this its wonderful

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Eyan Desir 02 July 2009

Interesting piece well written......

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a beautiful topic written and expressed beautifully..that is what all we seek the justice in a place which we never got..that justice which can be given only by one God...very well done..

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Afzal Shauq 02 July 2009

so many thanks...for inspiration from my poem friedly smile...which cause this sweet poem... thanks talented and dear friend..the poem is really rich and done in a sweet way indeed., , , expresion is very rich..idea is more he good and they way you done is perfect... liked it and its inspiring one..love to keep it in record..thanks again for insiration from my thoughts...10++++++++++++

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 July 2009

I love the rhyming.....truely.It's so fascinating! ! !

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