Saturday, February 3, 2018

Smell Of The Dead Comments

Rating: 5.0

The breeze softly came and
brought me the smell of dry leaves
When It sweeped through the dryness
Rustling and swishing of leaves I heard
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Rini Shibu
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Robert Murray Smith 28 June 2018

This is a marvellous write. An exemplar for all. Into my favourites. If you had any doubt about your poetic skills, refer to this beauty.+++++++++++++++++10

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Rini Shibu 28 June 2018

Thanks for your lovely words Robert

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 February 2018

Tears rolled out of memories My heart is breaking oh gentle breeze Come back to me I am waiting for you I wished to see once more those greens......fabulous expression Rini....Thanks for sharing...10

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Rini Shibu 09 February 2018

Thanks Dillip..! !

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Akhtar Jawad 04 February 2018

One more time, the kiss of life Be with me for one more day A poem that touched the deepest corners of the heart.

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Rini Shibu 04 February 2018

Thanks Akhtarji

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 February 2018

Tears rolled out of memories! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 04 February 2018

Thanks Edward for reading..! ! ! !

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Lamar Cole 03 February 2018

This is a very good and meaningful poem

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Rini Shibu 04 February 2018

Thanks Lamar.! !

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