Smart Little Mouse Comments

this poem is really good...i welcome u into a poets world! keep up the good work!

haha, you say you started writing two month ago? 'Cause you write really good, love the poem :)

like Tom and Jerry! Though i am already a teenager boy... i don't find that tv show cornie... it's funny, not cornie! ! ! ! yeah you're right, that mouse better not find a spouse or else they will multiply!

Cute, and obviously you can rhyme.