Smart City Comments

This is good. But what is missing is the poetic flow to it. Sir, try to insert a style of your own which makes it stand apart. What I am trying to say is to make it more poetic than just giving out information. Sorry to say this. But this is what i felt while reading it. My opinion could be entirely wrong too. Don't bother. Thank you.

Nice Thought You Penned it Extremely Nice

A well imaginative poem is astutely delineated. Projection of a smart city is nicely painted. I appreciate the way of presentation of this poem. Great work.10

No tone at all in this poem you made

Amazing poem. Keep it up

see so many appreciate thee 11 comments Ihardly get any you are sir POEM HUNTERS SPECISLLY A HORSE AS YOU SAY AND INTELLIGENT AS A MONKEY EVER COULD BE YOUR POETRY I fave found is too exotic lovely compose more will ye

Projection of a smart city is nice!

Cool keep it up

amazingly written.......

BEAUTIFULLY written.....Keep It Up! ! ! !

Cities which fall dismally short of the desired levels on these parameters are vying for the tag of smart city. We are the people who live on slogans given by politicians and murdabad-zindabad kind of things. Thanks, Asit.

Trees with full of birds and welcomes the guests. I loved the last two lines. A smart city is one that has all that you have listed so beautifully. Being a nature person, i would love it even more with trees and flowers around us. Thank you Asit. I wish this comes true.........A full vote for you, dear Poet.

what a stupid poem i hate it

Your poem was so interesting and was so useful for me as I had a a poetry comptiatcom

this poem was brilliant but there could be some more points

COOL. THANKS A TON