Tuesday, January 26, 2016

Small Things Matter Comments

Rating: 5.0

I opened the window
To welcome the sunlight
But something went wrong
As a small particle
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Bharati Nayak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 November 2019

A very heartwarming write. Affection and love shown by a loved one makes our day wonderful. It will ease/ cure the pain we feel at the moment. And the knowledge that they are safe gives us peace of mind. The mingling with nature in this write enhanced the beauty of this poem.

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Fantone Mdala 08 May 2019

most definitely, small things matter. Thanks for sharing the poem.

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Fantone Mdala 08 May 2019

most definitely, small things matter. Thanks for sharing the poem

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Akhtar Jawad 05 February 2019

Yes things that look small matter a lot. A thoughtful poem.

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Susan Williams 06 April 2018

Lovely, lovely poem, Bharati. A case of love being the best doctor! ! ! - -]I looked to the sunshine That had fallen in the courtyard Filling the space with golden warmth. [- - - - gorgeous verses, dear friend! 10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2017

No Mama, we are all safe and in good health I felt As if every thing has become right again Smile returned to my face As I looked to the sunshine That had fallen in the courtyard Filling the space with golden warmth..........touching expression. After storm a clear sky with golden raise is seen. Beautiful poem.

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Anamika Raj 28 August 2017

Small things done with love make those things great. A beautiful poem with a beautiful ending.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 14 November 2016

Often, it is small things that greatly matter. I loved this simple poem, particularly the beautiful ending. (10)

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Bharati Nayak 14 November 2016

Thank you very much for your appreciation.Life current is full of small moments.In our daily living we come with different situations through our interactions with people around us, A harsh word spoken by someone or unbecoming behavior of a loved one may appear small outside, but it affects so much.as it may down our spirit.When we see love and kindness around us we feel happy and jubilant.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 May 2016

Smile returned to my face As I looked to the sunshine That had fallen in the courtyard Filling the space with golden warmth.... a phone call changed everything in your life..... yes small things matters.... it is life's experience which make you write such things...... thank you dear poetess. tony..

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 April 2016

Love is what keeps everyone happy and wanted- our love our dear ones and the feeling that they love us. Nothing else matters. Wonderful poetry.

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Dev Anand 08 April 2016

yes very true all the smalll things matter in life. like ur poem dear poetess Bharati

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 February 2016

To respect nature and to help the poor. Thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 08 February 2016

Thanks a lot.Your visit to my poet page is really inspiring.

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 January 2016

There is no joy more than the joy one feels knowing his kids are doing fine.Nice write.

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M Asim Nehal 30 January 2016

Just a phone call from beloved is enough to swing our mood, pain and sufferings, , , Wonderful poem Madam,10++++

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Abhilasha Bhatt 26 January 2016

Life becomes full after adding and adding these small moments....without these small events life becomes meaningless....in fact we will not call it life....beautifully narrated....thank you for sharing :)

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