I opened the window
To welcome the sunlight
But something went wrong
As a small particle
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most definitely, small things matter. Thanks for sharing the poem.
most definitely, small things matter. Thanks for sharing the poem
Lovely, lovely poem, Bharati. A case of love being the best doctor! ! ! - -]I looked to the sunshine That had fallen in the courtyard Filling the space with golden warmth. [- - - - gorgeous verses, dear friend! 10+++
No Mama, we are all safe and in good health I felt As if every thing has become right again Smile returned to my face As I looked to the sunshine That had fallen in the courtyard Filling the space with golden warmth..........touching expression. After storm a clear sky with golden raise is seen. Beautiful poem.
Small things done with love make those things great. A beautiful poem with a beautiful ending.
Often, it is small things that greatly matter. I loved this simple poem, particularly the beautiful ending. (10)
Thank you very much for your appreciation.Life current is full of small moments.In our daily living we come with different situations through our interactions with people around us, A harsh word spoken by someone or unbecoming behavior of a loved one may appear small outside, but it affects so much.as it may down our spirit.When we see love and kindness around us we feel happy and jubilant.
Smile returned to my face As I looked to the sunshine That had fallen in the courtyard Filling the space with golden warmth.... a phone call changed everything in your life..... yes small things matters.... it is life's experience which make you write such things...... thank you dear poetess. tony..
Love is what keeps everyone happy and wanted- our love our dear ones and the feeling that they love us. Nothing else matters. Wonderful poetry.
yes very true all the smalll things matter in life. like ur poem dear poetess Bharati
To respect nature and to help the poor. Thanks for sharing.
There is no joy more than the joy one feels knowing his kids are doing fine.Nice write.
Just a phone call from beloved is enough to swing our mood, pain and sufferings, , , Wonderful poem Madam,10++++
Life becomes full after adding and adding these small moments....without these small events life becomes meaningless....in fact we will not call it life....beautifully narrated....thank you for sharing :)
A very heartwarming write. Affection and love shown by a loved one makes our day wonderful. It will ease/ cure the pain we feel at the moment. And the knowledge that they are safe gives us peace of mind. The mingling with nature in this write enhanced the beauty of this poem.