Friday, April 28, 2006

Small Talk Angel Style Comments

Rating: 2.3

I saw something white in the bushes
it was a bunch of angels
wings folded taking an
ambrosia break and
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Michael Shepherd
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Esther Leclerc 28 April 2006

How creative is this? Love the idea of a mere human eavesdropping on angels, gossiping over ambrosia! Food for thought here, too.

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Poetry Hound 28 April 2006

Excellent, Mr. Shepherd! How very original. I loved, 'I promise to take it out before...' Ha ha!

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Mary Nagy 28 April 2006

Michael, I love this poem! I love the thought of you eavesdropping...and then sharing your information with us! I love the visual of the angels chatting in the bushes! I love how you bring to light the lies we tell everyday...and that they're heard! I love everything about this poem! Very inspiring Michael! sincerely, Mary

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kskdnj sajn 28 April 2006

Cute ending and thoughtful poem Shep. Angie.

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Michael Shepherd

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