Small Sad World Comments

The poem needs some reconsideration. It is free verse, so it won't be hard for you. What appears wrong, is the mixing of personal negativeness with death, guilt, envy, and then with hope and love. Suggestion: Examine one or two concepts per poem, and not a bunch of them, without actually offering a proper analysis to any.

The sense of sadness is felt in this read. You have expressed the feelings that many of us experience in our lives. It was nicely written and thanks for sharing this with us. Scott