Small philosophy
Poem Number 980
(not a poem, but an essay) :
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Great poem Sylvia. Its really a champian poem for the cause of animal welfare. I read this one too with the great symbolic point of view which takes us to the ill actions and arrogance of powerful towards the one not so fortunate.
Thank you very much for penning this precious gem and telling the truth. This poem of course needs full rating and I have already rated full point for this poem. Your high quality of work will definitely be preserved in the showcase of the world literature. Readers will definitely read this poem again and again. Let peace multiply ever! May God bring happiness and peace for you!
No one can prevent me reading your Poem Number 980, an essay poem of clever expression basing upon perception and humor of high quality and this needs many supportive reviews. Other's jealousy and violent mind cannot affect me at all. I love peace and I am a peaceful poet. A successful reading and commenting gives me immense satisfaction. This extra-ordinary poem is Mahakul's member poem of the day! I hope this will also be chosen as Poem of the Day in future!
Attractive wolf's pack if offered with bad mentality and violent motive, we should avoid it and preserve humanity for peace. By seeing my many comments below this poem if any man burns in jealousy and violently attacks doing nasty politics and cries like crocodile then I am not going to be afraid of or I am not going to leave reading such beautiful and worthy work. This is my freedom to read rightly giving my precious time and give my right feedback. This poem is outstanding one!
Humanity should be maintained and resources should be well maintained. Then only there will be beauty and mutual sustainability. Soul is peaceful and always hankers for love and peace. Original status of soul is justified through peace only. This essay is wonderful. We should keep a distance measuring in hands, when we know that a violent man, who does nasty politics is dangerous and such a man is responsible for killing innocent creatures like bees, ants and many others.
Although nature and nature's existence both sequences are threatened, still man is interested to see wolf. Life on Earth is worth the most and we agree with this. Every creature has its own right to live as this planet is made for every creature. Humanity is eager to know and no one can destroy this right. We should rightly preserve the substance of humanity. You have transferred a nice message in this poem.
The existence of humanity is on this earth for service of mankind as well as of other creatures. No one can violate natural laws. Selfish desires many give rise to vices and vices to selfish desires and vice versa. Man destroys his own kind and you have truly observed current situation. But man should be careful to maintain his ow dignity and responsibility to promote his duty of love and peace.
An example or single occurrence of something is just violating laws and cooperation through violent and negative mentality. A serious instance of fraud, corruption, violence and at last fighting and killing is brought up from instance by violent man. This is not at all acceptable in a developed and peaceful society. Humor expressed through the wolf and his pack is justified. You have very cleverly expressed your perception here.
Maintenance of peace is encouraged and maintenance of all natural resources we should do properly and basing upon righteous laws. Joint working needs responsibility and cooperation. We should cooperate each other and grow old towards God to feel his mercy and bliss. We should be protective towards all resources. Sustainability should be judged.
Life is a gracious gift given by God. Every creature needs freedom to feel and promote. Preservation of mankind with respect to peace and love is very much necessary. Killing through fighting, war and violence should be stopped The world wants to see beauty of affection and caring and dignity of love. The world needs that all creatures should live in harmony and peace.
If we will honour, care and love for Bumblebees then definitely they will preserve honey for us. They are also very important creatures. We should realize this truth and we should take care of all resources of the world. From true heart in greatest quantity and greatest quality we should honour them all. Killing creatures means violating natural laws. Killing is never admired in scriptures. We should be aware about precious life.
Always we should learn self and others and we should keep honour for future generations too. We should honour all creatures starting from micro-organisms to insects and starting from animals to birds and human beings and staring from trees to rivers, lakes and oceans. We should feel this truth that as we sow as we reap. Action of honour will definitely bring reaction of honour.
If we care, love and share our thoughts with others this Earth will never be small for us rather this planet will grow more in love and greenness, in unity and beauty and in universality and brotherhood. We should realize this truth and we should encourage future generations to enhance beauty and love. Mankind should dream reality of peace and mankind should behold the dignity as advised by God to keep his garden clean and pure.
Always we hope for love, peace, brevity and dignity. We not only hope but this is our right as we are children of God. Finally we come to the point of peace. We allow our minds to grow with beauty, duty and philosophy. We should grow old with infinite knowledge of God everyday. After seeing this beautiful Earth and feeling her love we will feel this naturally the peace is unit of mind.
There is constant multiplication in this Earth. Mankind is advanced with science and technology and mankind gets more comfort. We have to understand Earth's cycle and feel her natural nourishment and beauty of caring and creativity. God's greatest beauty is hidden within and we can feel his mercy. But at modern time people fight each other and this provokes thought.
Again you have created a very beautiful and outstanding work and this is very attractive. I have snatched my time to read this poem eagerly and give my feedback. The title of this poem values more. This is Small Philosophy but this has broader sense. Broadness is hidden within small aspect. As I feel this poem is special and poem of the day for me today. Very happily I declare this poem as a rare poem among rearrest poems which carries your essence of true perception.
I also liked your concluding para the most. A clarion call Sylvie. worth to be listened to. It is a full poem. Nice. No doubt 10+
This Earth is for man and also for the beast to live together and live in harmony. We are here to foster life and not to destroy it. God has created everything to work together for general well being. Unfortunately we fight and kill each other. Instead of fighting, we have to promote peace. A beautiful piece of advice for a war ridden world....
I concur with the wonderful comments of Sir Akhtar. Beautifully crafted and well conveyed. Onto my Poem List.
nature's existence is also threatened, humanity is often curious, eager to see the wolf, to know where the wolf's pack is, Mankind destroys itself. a fine and relevant theme. tony