No time to prepare
Shoved over cliff by sorrows
Float down now, gently
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Another great poem, Mary you have a way with expression! Good WRITE!
As one who is grieving a recent loss I find great comfort in this poem. Most of all I find these words marvelous to contemplate: Someone, unseen, cares Patting shoulder from afar Dwell in gentle thoughts Thank you
You have a unique style of writing and come up with such novel thoughts.. Recipe for grief..Fold laughter into sorrow.. Make a grief souffle........ Thanks..
my initial impression...Wow! as one who has dabbled in threading haiku I can appreciate the effort necessary to craft such a compelling piece. I am in awe of the result. peace, kenneth
Soft floating voyage through some of the elements of grief.
I couldn't put a title to all my feelings....until I read your poem. Thank you for sharing.