Tuesday, October 23, 2007

Small Mourning Pieces Comments

Rating: 4.8

No time to prepare
Shoved over cliff by sorrows
Float down now, gently
...
Read full text

Mary Havran
COMMENTS
Jenna Thomas 13 November 2009

I couldn't put a title to all my feelings....until I read your poem. Thank you for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Janice Wabencki 29 March 2008

So gentle it is very comforting.

0 0 Reply
Coreena Dejesus 10 March 2008

Another great poem, Mary you have a way with expression! Good WRITE!

0 0 Reply
Anja Meijer 04 February 2008

As one who is grieving a recent loss I find great comfort in this poem. Most of all I find these words marvelous to contemplate: Someone, unseen, cares Patting shoulder from afar Dwell in gentle thoughts Thank you

0 0 Reply
V F 24 January 2008

You have a unique style of writing and come up with such novel thoughts.. Recipe for grief..Fold laughter into sorrow.. Make a grief souffle........ Thanks..

0 0 Reply
Fredi Staire 21 January 2008

A poem to return to when grief comes again. Thanks.

0 0 Reply
Piere Montblanc 19 January 2008

Mots pour laver la peine de votre coeur, merci

0 0 Reply
James Walbourne 15 January 2008

Very fine, laced with bittersweet poignancy

0 0 Reply
kenneth william snow 01 January 2008

my initial impression...Wow! as one who has dabbled in threading haiku I can appreciate the effort necessary to craft such a compelling piece. I am in awe of the result. peace, kenneth

0 0 Reply
Robert Gentry 03 December 2007

Soft floating voyage through some of the elements of grief.

0 0 Reply
Ted Ednar 10 November 2007

Nicely done. I am impressed.

0 0 Reply
Peter Cyril Riloskovic 01 November 2007

This words has power.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success