Friday, October 28, 2005

Small Goddess Of Delicate Flowers Comments

Rating: 4.8

It is raining lightly in the forest,
Little flowers begin to droop
In the fragile atmosphere
Of God’s sympathetic tears.
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Uriah Hamilton
COMMENTS
Joy Vanderhelm 17 January 2006

Such heart and very heart-warming as well. There's a hint of sadness, as well, for the uncertainty and fragility of love.

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Amberlee Carter 05 November 2005

Hey Uriah, your words are so soothing this morning. Thank you so much for sharing these with us..

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Ivy Christou 01 November 2005

sweet, tender and endearing.. I'm a fan of your poetry already! HBH

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Ernestine Northover 28 October 2005

There's a fairytale element here Uriah, like someone lost.........! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Very sweet poem Sincerely Ernestine

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John Kay 28 October 2005

Hard to match the last stanza. I'm jealous of those words.

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Mary Nagy 28 October 2005

Oh, this is so lovely.........yes, delicate is the right word for it. Great poem Uriah. I have often watched tiny flowers bend in the rain and wondered how they survive...yet they almost always do. Sincerely, Mary

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 28 October 2005

So sweetly sad....very nice Uriah.

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Stuart Mason 28 October 2005

There is a delicate mix of tenderness, love and poignant sadness in this poem. Seems very fresh to me.

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