Monday, November 10, 2014

Small Gifts: Contributing To Other's Happiness! .... [**; Nov. Challenge Poem Entry; Good Deeds; Kindness; Medium] Comments

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You've caught me in a bitchy mood;
I'll try, as I type, to not be …. too rude.
Perhaps you'll consider that a gift.
I don't wish to cause a poet-to-poet rift.
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Bri Edwards
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Valentin Savin 16 May 2019

What a good piece of poetry. I like it. Especially when you say that you are trying to do as your wife says. I favor it. Your poems sound well. Your gifts are help to others in need. Be friend or fiend. My gifts are a smile and some pleasant words I try to tell you. You have been and still are a good post man and a poet.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 January 2018

“Small Gifts: Contributing To Other's Happiness! ” is a pragmatic write! I would love to quote the first stanza: You've caught me in a bitchy mood/ I'll try, as I type, to not be …. too rude/Perhaps you'll consider that a gift/I don't wish to cause a poet-to-poet rift”. Loved reading this poem!

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Loke Kok Yee 17 January 2018

Don't care too much what the computer says But your touching poem did make my day A glass of water given to one in need Will long be remembered as a good deed Thanks Bri.

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