Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Slumber - No Its A Monster! Comments

Rating: 3.5

To be a baby once again
For now I fell so insane.
Biology is a real topsy-turvy,
History seems like a mystery.
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NEETHA SASIDHARAN
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Ramesh Rai 17 May 2014

lovely wrrite. keep writing.

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 08 August 2012

I like the way you compared your situation with your little baby sister...even I have gone through the same experiences...brought back memories..do write more... :)

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Sharad Juneja 21 April 2012

It has kept me smiling, , , , , , , , , , , beautiful indeed it is

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it made me chuckle quite a few times.yes, biology is real mess.and it really sometimes gets on my nerves seeing the toddlers wrecking havoc and then sleeping.sleep eludes.

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Binish Cd 04 January 2012

a well knitted poem with a bit of humor.......

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Dave Walker 18 October 2011

I really like this a great write. May i invite you to read my poem called, What was your fear.

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