Saturday, March 30, 2019

Slumber Comments

Rating: 4.7

SHE WAS DEEP ASLEEP
DREAMING OF ALL THE THINGS SHE WISH SHE HAD
NEVER YET TRIED
ONLY MADE THEM ALIVE IN HEAR DREAMS
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Roshana Phillips
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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 January 2020

An exceptional poem, dear Ma’am Roshana...10+++😍

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Roshana Phillips 01 April 2019

Thank-you Bryony Sheldon and Ratnakar Mandlik

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Bryony Sheldon 30 March 2019

Is it bad that I can relate to this? Great poem- 10!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 30 March 2019

After all, dreams are dreams and lot of efforts and hard work are necessary for transforming them into reality. Only deep sleep may not help. A meaningful verse. Thanks for sharing.

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Roshana Phillips

Roshana Phillips

Guyana, Georgetown
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