Monday, July 31, 2006
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THE thunder went bang,
the bang went bark, the
smoke begane to scream,
the scream started to laugh,
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr
31 July 2006
CHANGE OF POEM STRUCTURE...AND I LIKE IT...MAKES FOR EASIER READING...NICE PENNING, DAVID'''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR
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7/29/2025 2:11:11 PM # 1.0.0
David, I like the element of confusion and how you've found yourself in the middle of it all. Really interesting... well done! ! Brian