Monday, June 12, 2017

Slug Surprise Comments

Rating: 5.0

I pushed open the creaky door,
And walked across the kichen floor,
In search of a late night snack,
I failed to see the glistening track.
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Stephen Katona
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Tom Allport 12 June 2017

a funny poem of what can happen when one goes for a late night snack? .........well penned.

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Stephen Katona 12 June 2017

Thank you Tom, hope it made you laugh.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 June 2017

Yo walked upon the kitchen floor opening creaky door and this amazed mind with your nice expression in this poem. This poem is very wonderfully fun giving and this carries nice surprise. Humor is also expressed in this poem...10

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Stephen Katona 12 June 2017

Thank you Kumarmani, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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